Barbs of the Gazers by Spyrill | Mind2Mind

Criticism welcome for what could have been done better. My typography is awful. That's Bookman Old Style matched with Agenda.

This turned out better than the last one, which very loosely followed 9 columns. Shapes are more effective. Gave effort to the story, and hoped to mitigate overuse of garish words. It's based on real paranoid stuff where I'm struggling with my mind wanting to feel that people are watching me because I'm somehow so important, and they would be as critical or more critical of me as I am of myself, and they can see all my faults. In the end the cycle is broken when I separate myself from my brain. The thorns look illustrationy, I tried hard from photo stock to make them grow from her flesh.



All pictures of the model are from nothingreal0
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Tunnels from grae-hall
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Tunnel from disguy2k
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Thorns from rifka1
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Thorns from phantompanther-stock
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Thorns from purhipnoze
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Thorns from girlsobloody
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